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Occulis
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 Posted: 03/03/04 - 16:51 Post subject: it was christmas and she
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FireIsFun
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 16:52 Post subject:
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Died.
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Paco
RealPoor Jedi
Joined: 13 Oct 2002
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Location: Jacksonville, FL
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 16:52 Post subject:
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The end.
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Yabden
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Joined: 13 Oct 2002
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Location: Ohio
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 16:56 Post subject:
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such a buzzkill
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Silvermouse
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Joined: 12 Oct 2002
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 18:26 Post subject: Re: it was christmas and she
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| Occulis wrote: | ...
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It was Christmas and she couldn't believe she was sleeping with her stepson in front of the tree. He was only 16, but his huge, Scandinavian c**k was nearly more than she could bear.
Biting into her fist to muffle any screams, she rode his piece for the entire 4 a.m. hour before he finally grunted and released his semen into her plush channel. She could feel them traveling...seeking...and then inseminating her, claiming her egg for their own.
She was pleased with his Christmas gift, and in 9 months a gift of her own would be birthed, although she planned to lie and say it was her husband's (his father). Quietly, they snuck back upstairs into their rooms, hoping that Stewart hadn't heard the ruckus (only one moan had escaped, but she was sure he slept through it).
They f****d many hundreds of times after that (often he claimed her after football practice) before finally being caught on the wrong end of Stewart's shotgun one late October night. Apparantly Stewart liked to watch and had, in fact, been watching them f**k for months before tiring of the sport and blowing their heads off and then his own.
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Mental_Hernia
RealPoor Guru
Joined: 14 Oct 2002
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Location: Texas
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 18:29 Post subject: Re: it was christmas and she
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| Silvermouse wrote: | | Occulis wrote: | ...
please complete this story |
It was Christmas and she couldn't believe she was sleeping with her stepson in front of the tree. He was only 16, but his huge, Scandinavian c**k was nearly more than she could bear.
Biting into her fist to muffle any screams, she rode his piece for the entire 4 a.m. hour before he finally grunted and released his semen into her plush channel. She could feel them traveling...seeking...and then inseminating her, claiming her egg for their own.
She was pleased with his Christmas gift, and in 9 months a gift of her own would be birthed, although she planned to lie and say it was her husband's (his father). Quietly, they snuck back upstairs into their rooms, hoping that Stewart hadn't heard the ruckus (only one moan had escaped, but she was sure he slept through it).
They f****d many hundreds of times after that (often he claimed her after football practice) before finally being caught on the wrong end of Stewart's shotgun one late October night. Apparantly Stewart liked to watch and had, in fact, been watching them f**k for months before tiring of the sport and blowing their heads off and then his own. |
LOL
wtf
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Suriya
Luke Warm
Joined: 14 Oct 2002
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 18:48 Post subject:
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...got f****d hard and fast!
Wearing only her elf hat and some reindeer bells.
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Uglarbashdemgud
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Joined: 14 Oct 2002
Posts: 3245
Location: Riding on 2 wheels, One at a time.
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 18:50 Post subject:
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Suri hon, I need those bells back by the way...
Thanks
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Xarpolis
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Joined: 15 Oct 2002
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Location: Philly, PA
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 19:29 Post subject:
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Dude silver. WTF did you come up with that shit? I'm amazed that you're such a tallent. You should team up with Dunn to help liven his book up a bit more so than it already is.
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Occulis
RealPoor Jedi
Joined: 11 Oct 2002
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Location: Moral Relativity Central
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 19:31 Post subject: Re: it was christmas and she
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| Silvermouse wrote: | | Occulis wrote: | ...
please complete this story |
It was Christmas and she couldn't believe she was sleeping with her stepson in front of the tree. He was only 16, but his huge, Scandinavian c**k was nearly more than she could bear.
Biting into her fist to muffle any screams, she rode his piece for the entire 4 a.m. hour before he finally grunted and released his semen into her plush channel. She could feel them traveling...seeking...and then inseminating her, claiming her egg for their own.
She was pleased with his Christmas gift, and in 9 months a gift of her own would be birthed, although she planned to lie and say it was her husband's (his father). Quietly, they snuck back upstairs into their rooms, hoping that Stewart hadn't heard the ruckus (only one moan had escaped, but she was sure he slept through it).
They f****d many hundreds of times after that (often he claimed her after football practice) before finally being caught on the wrong end of Stewart's shotgun one late October night. Apparantly Stewart liked to watch and had, in fact, been watching them f**k for months before tiring of the sport and blowing their heads off and then his own. |
hahaha hot shit!
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Xarpolis
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Joined: 15 Oct 2002
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Location: Philly, PA
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 21:03 Post subject:
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It was Christmas and she finally finished wrapping her special gift. Oh, what a suprise this one would be. Joey had always wanted one. Ever since his best friend Sarah got hers. He had been such a good boy this year, and Cindy could hardly wait to unveil this gift. It took her months of picking and choosing to finally get the right one! She retired for the evening, pleased with her decision. I can still get at least 5 hours of sleep before he wakes me, she thought to herself.
At 7:00, Joey began knocking on her bedroom door. This is something she had grown used to in these last 4 years, when he had become old enough to tell time. She woke with a blissful aura surrounding her. It was almost time to show him! She was nearly as excited as he was. When she opened the door, he was standing there smiling at her. He's such a beautiful kid, she thought, then took his hand and began to walk to the stairs.
She had been living alone for 9 months before Joey came along. She was pregnant with him when Phillip was called off to Persian Gulf 3 months earlier. On the day he was to be born, she recieved word from the Army that her husband was killed in battle. Joey would never get to meet his father. She was heartbroken for many years, but was finally starting to come around. Phillip was a good man, who was always there for her. Cindy promised herself that she would always be there for Joey. He wouldn't be like those other father-less children that do nothing but cause trouble. Not her Joey! But it was hard. Prozac had calmed her nerves for a years, but as of October, Dr. Kalum said she no longer needed it. She was finally a-OK on her own. This was great news.
The Christmas morning was rather chilly. her hardening nipples told her as much, but then again... it could also be due to the excitement. As They decended the stair well she couldn't help but notice how good the carpet felt on her naked feet. At the foot of the stairs, Joey got a peak at the pile of gifts that lay under the tree and let out a squeel of pure joy before he ran into the living room and sat on the floor. Cindy laughed. He always made her smile, and she loved him for it. Suddenly the thought of Phillip drifted through her head, and the smile fell from her face. She was determined to not let this day be spoiled though, so she quickly brushed his image away, and went to join Joey.
They tore through the smaller gifts quickly. School supplies, a few video games, some DVD's. Cindy does quite well for a single mom. Only two gifts remained. The first was a very small gift box, with sparkely paper. She told him to open it slowly, because she liked seeing the anticipation on his face. He made his way through the paper and to the box, promptly opening it. There was a note that she made with green construction paper, glitter and some puffy paint pens that said:
I love you so much, but that you should know
so head out back and see what's in the snow
In a flash, Joey had his slippers and jacket on, and ran to the back door. Cindy unlocked it, so he could get outside and see his gift. There, in all it's glory was his brand new BMX style bike! He'd always wanted one. No more Huffy for him! She was glad that he liked it, but even more happy that they were finally at the last gift. After a few minutes, they returned inside where he prepaired to open the last present.
It sat on the ground. It was about 2 feet square in size, and weighed about 20 lbs. This didn't phase Joey at all though, and he picked it up and shook it. There was a dull clunking sound inside, and he couldn't help but wonder what it was. The paper came off in a blur of hand movements. Underneith was a brown cardboard box. Much like the kind used for shipping. It was held together with lots of brown tape also. Cindy quickly handed joey a Letter Opener, so he could get through this dense brown barrier. With a grunt, he cut his way through the tape, to find his last treasure. The one his mother spent months trying to find. He opened the box, screamed, and dropped it to the floor. It was what he always wanted, but not in the way that he wanted it. There in the box, was the mashed carcas of a Yorkshire Terrior.
Cindy let out a quick laugh, and recalled the events of a week ago. Every day for the past few months she had driven the back roads, through neighborhoods, on her way home from work. 12 days ago, she finally found a dog wandering the streets. He was hard to get, but her Ford Explorer had no problem rendering the animal lifeless. Then it was just a matter loading the dead thing into the trunk, and taking it home where it would rest in the freezer until Christmas. What a perfect gift and perfect suprise this was, and she was happy.
Five years have passed since that fatefull day. Dr. Kalum placed her back on her medication as well as multiple others. The people here are nice, and while she isn't allowed to see or talk to Joey anymore, she still imagines that he's there with her. The white room gets so lonley at night. At least the screams from the other patients don't keep her awake anymore.
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median
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 21:31 Post subject:
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colesnotes
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ATM Banana
RealPoor Master of Posts
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 21:42 Post subject:
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silvermous wins.
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Mental_Hernia
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Location: Texas
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 21:53 Post subject:
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What the f**k...
I was expecting a giant vibrator or something, not a dead dog.
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Silvermouse
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 22:06 Post subject:
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Your form is impeccable, Xarpolis, but there was a flaw in your story: what child wouldn't be pleased with a dead terrier for Christmas? Your story leads us to believe Joey didn't like it.
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Suriya
Luke Warm
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 22:32 Post subject:
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| Uglarbashdemgud wrote: | Suri hon, I need those bells back by the way...
Thanks |
no.
Bring me some Coors Light, damn you.
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Renork
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 23:18 Post subject:
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Silvermouse is teh win so far. Someone try to top it.
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Akronn
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 23:30 Post subject:
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I only enjoy turning Sab's stories into my erotic fantasies.
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Yabden
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Posted: 03/03/04 - 23:52 Post subject:
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Xarpolis, that story was funny as hell. I tip my hat to you.
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Occulis
RealPoor Jedi
Joined: 11 Oct 2002
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Location: Moral Relativity Central
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Posted: 03/06/04 - 10:34 Post subject:
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You guys don't get it about writin stories... no one is trying to beat anyone else out. It's all good!
Xarp great story! 
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NinjaBurger
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Posted: 03/06/04 - 10:44 Post subject:
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f****d him hard and fast!
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atarom
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Posted: 03/06/04 - 18:39 Post subject:
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good thread!!
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Lumberg_fekdher
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Posted: 03/06/04 - 19:47 Post subject:
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It was Christmas when she finally stopped f*****g her father. It had been 3 weeks of constant father-f*****g when they finally left the house for the first time to eat out for Christmas dinner. That night, they f****d more.
Also..why are we all Ish's_Lil_Bitch now?
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