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Sunkorzien
Sir Postalot

Joined: 14 Oct 2002 Posts: 1443
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Posted: 03/27/03 - 09:09 Post subject: Someone proof read this, thx
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The responsibility of censoring the Internet in order to protect children should be left to parents due to certain legal and constitutional ramifications.
Adam Schwartzberg
Brent Cobb
3/24/2003
English IV: Science Fiction
Debate (Internet Censorship)
Internet censorship is a common controversial topic today. Many times in congress and other assemblies, the issue of constitutionality has come up over censorship of the Internet. Censoring inappropriate material in order to protect children is a noble and just cause, but it can not be done without violating certain constitutional rights.
The first amendment states that: “Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press; or the right of the people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the government for a redress of grievances.” Clearly, censoring the Internet is a violation of this first amendment. While we believe that Internet censorship is necessary to protect the youth of America, it is not up to the United States government to put into place legislature, programs, or agencies to censor the Internet due to the constitutional issues. We believe that parents should be ultimately responsible for what their children come in contact with on the Internet.
We believe that it is relatively straightforward and economical to put into place multiple safeguards in order to protect the youth of America from damaging material on the Internet. Some of these safeguards include a rating system, software monitoring, parental monitoring, and more responsibility placed upon internet service providers.
A rating system could be easily put into place and administrated by any number of government agencies. This would allow parents to better comprehend exactly what it is that their children are viewing. This rating system would be completely constitutional because it does not actually censor the material but only allows for a better understanding of the nature of the website. Such a rating system is already in place for movies and video games.
Software monitoring is something that can be easily installed and configured by parents for a relatively cheap price. This software can report to the parents which websites their children have been visiting or can disallow the visitation of any inappropriate websites altogether.
The two safeguards previously listed both rely upon one thing: the concern and involvement of the parents. If parents do not take appropriate action to ensure the safety of their child, then of course their child runs the risk of running into inappropriate material. That is why the parent is ultimately responsible for the content that their children view.
Another safeguard that could be put into place is more involvement of internet service providers in protecting children. America Online already has many different pieces of software in place that protect children. Other internet service providers could easily follow suit by distributing similar software. Another way that internet service providers could protect children is by having a list of websites that are inappropriate. Parents could request that the internet service provider block access to these websites for their account, denying their children access to these websites. All of the aforementioned safeguards would cost much less than having a government agency control Internet censorship and they are all constitutional, unlike many other solutions.
The terrorist attacks of September 11th have also had an effect on Internet censorship. The government now realizes how vulnerable America really is at home, and how much information passes through the Internet. Terrorists could theoretically disrupt daily life by launching attacks on the Internet, specifically targeting the United States. This threat led to the passing of the PATRIOT ACT which allows the government to spy on web surfers. While this is a necessary measure in preventing terrorist attacks on the Internet, it would be on the verge of being unconstitutional to have it put into place permanently.
Internet censorship is still a controversial matter because it is so new. There is not a whole lot of information on it, and not many people know anything about it. While it is necessary to protect children through controlling the Internet to a certain degree, full censorship can not be allowed. It is not constitutional, and it would severely restrict the flow of normal information on the Internet. Ultimately, parents are the key in controlling what their children do on the Internet, not the United States government.
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sinrakin
RealPoor Master of Posts

Joined: 11 Oct 2002 Posts: 7044
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Posted: 03/27/03 - 10:07 Post subject:
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Looks pretty well written - nice job. I'll toss in a bunch of random thoughts about style, but feel free to ignore any/all of them, for fear of sounding as stodgy as the crap I write
pp 1: "common controversial topic". Not bad, but strikes me as a tiny bit awkward. Maybe "common controversy"? Or "controversial, yet frequently encountered concept"?
pp 1: "congress and other assemblies" -> "congress and other forums"? The discussion aspect is what you're emphasizing here, not the assembled body aspect I think.
pp 1: "noble and just" a little too grandiose maybe? "understandable cause"? "laudable"? I don't know.
pp 1: "can not be done without" -> "can not be done by the government without" - that's actually your point, not that it can't be done at all.
pp 4: "administrated" -> "administered"
pp 4: "to better comprehend" -> "better to comprehend" if you care about split inifinitives
pp 5: "for a relatively cheap price" -> "relatively cheaply", or "nexpensively"? Sounded slightly awkward, but maybe it's fine.
pp 5: "any inappropriate websites altogether" -> I'd get rid of either "any" or "altogether"; they're redundant.
pp 6: "one thing: the concern and involvement": I know "<concern and involvement>" could be considered one compound thing, but it still made me think "huh?" for a second. I'd just delete the "one thing:".
pp 6: "that is why the parent is" -> "... parents are": why switch to singular parent all of a sudden?
pp 7: "aforementioned" -> "these"? just simpler.
The second last paragraph is a good point, but it's a little disconected from the rest of the article. It's talking about spying, not censorship. It's bracketed by paragraphs about protecting children, but makes a national security point which is then ignored in the last paragraph where the argument is summed up as "Ultimately, parents are the key...". I'd try to incorporate it more fully into the conclusion so it doesn't look like an afterthought.
Hope at least some of that was useful...
Other points about the argument itself: the "blocked sites" approach has had significant problems, both in terms of blocking 100% of objectionable sites, and in not blocking inoffensive sites. Many people feel that it can never be made truly reliable. Common carrier laws may influence what level of interference ISPs can exert (I don't know much about that). You might mention the push for a k-12 (or whatever it is) top level domain (as opposed to .com) which would only be allowed to contain child-appropriate material.
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Occulis
RealPoor Jedi

Joined: 11 Oct 2002 Posts: 13293
Location: Moral Relativity Central
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Posted: 03/28/03 - 01:40 Post subject:
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try adding more pictures of old mexican men sucking c**k
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Massnova
Luke Warm

Joined: 04 Feb 2003 Posts: 108
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Posted: 03/28/03 - 03:31 Post subject:
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| Dunn wrote: | | try adding more pictures of old mexican men sucking c**k | Well we know what Dunn likes to j**k off to.
As for the report: It looks like a great paper and a Great topic to write about. I hope you get an A for it. You are right, Parents should be the ones to censor the content that their children see on the Internet. It is the parents that should decide what is right and wrong and teach their kids with good morals and the ability to think for them selves of what is right and wrong. And if that fails then blame the Grandparents for spoling their grandkids.
Good Luck on your report.
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Fluxus the Rogue
Luke Warm

Joined: 11 Nov 2002 Posts: 385
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Posted: 03/28/03 - 08:12 Post subject:
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| Quote: | | Clearly, censoring the Internet is a violation of this first amendment. |
If it is clearly a violation of the First Amendment, why even bother calling it a controversy?
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Aluaeia
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Posted: 03/28/03 - 12:27 Post subject:
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| Fluxus the Rogue wrote: | | Quote: | | Clearly, censoring the Internet is a violation of this first amendment. |
If it is clearly a violation of the First Amendment, why even bother calling it a controversy?  |
Because some people are fundamentalist christian fuckwits who think the government should save them from the gross abundance (harhar) of porn available on the net.
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Fluxus the Rogue
Luke Warm

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Posted: 03/28/03 - 13:00 Post subject:
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| Aluaeia wrote: | | Fluxus the Rogue wrote: | | Quote: | | Clearly, censoring the Internet is a violation of this first amendment. |
If it is clearly a violation of the First Amendment, why even bother calling it a controversy?  |
Because some people are fundamentalist christian fuckwits who think the government should save them from the gross abundance (harhar) of porn available on the net. |
I don't think the case is quite so clear.
For example, you may exercise your freedom by wearing a t-shirt that says "I Support Porno!" in public. However, if that same shirt said "I support porno" on the front and had a picture of a fully nude woman using a dildo on the back of it, then you would be thrown in jail.
Everyone has cable television. The FCC governs content of television. You want see Debbie Does Dallas on ABC this weekend because the FCC doesn't allow pornograpy to be transmitted in a free, readily accessible format. If you make the choice to purchase Spice or Playboy Channel or whatever, then that's OK. Does the FCC infringe upon 1st Amendment rights because they govern porn over the TV? (I realize I am simplifying this issue).
The real argument here is that the internet is NOT a media that can be controlled by one nation state. It is international. The US Constitution holds weight only in the U.S. However, I don't think you can clearly state that the 1st Amendment grants the right for uncensored pornography. It's a valid debate.
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Sunkorzien
Sir Postalot

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Posted: 03/28/03 - 18:49 Post subject:
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It's a debate, so that why I wrote it the way I did.
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