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Greggy
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Link the World: Kanthem, a newly discovered land in the world of Morthan
Killing character: Character Killing is Allowed.
Character Revival: If your character is dead, It's dead.
Storyline end: The story will end when everything is resolved.
Storyline description: Five friends are trying to survive after being abbandend on a new isle that has been lost for millions of years in there world.
Private Storyline: My Storyline is Private, enless I pick someone to write along with it, It's being active in a RPG, But reading one is what it's all about.
Particular location in the World: In the middle of the ocean
Current time of the Story events: The year is 2056, everyone is happy, there are no problems in the world.
Start a story:
"Hey Jamie" Liz said running up to her friend, "Your going to be late for you fighting class, we're learning how to stun with only our toes today."
"Not now please Jamie said looking worried, that new island, my father was supposed to have returned here from it by now"
"Don't worry there is probably nothing only, maybe some wild chimps, a leopard or two, nothing dangerous"
"I don't know liz, i just have this bad feeling."
"Hey guys" Lucas yelled at liz and jamie.
"we're going to be late," there other friend Kyle finished the sentence for Lucas.
"Come Jamie, it's going to be all right," liz gave her boyfriend a gentle kiss on the cheek "Now let's go, we've been late already twice before, the Dean doesn't go nice on peoples third time."
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/16/07 - 20:13 Post subject: Kanthem
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Jamie had finished his fighting lesson, He had been concentrating on his father instead of his work, He accidently got kicked in the jaw.
"Is it okay?" Liz asked, then smiled at him, they were walking down the beach with there hands laced, she loved it when they done things like this.
"Yeah, Just a little swollen, but i'll be fine... Liz?"
"Yeah?"
"I'm worried, It's sundown, he still isn't back, none of the other men are either, it cannot be good"
"You need to loosen up, none of us know how big the island is, it could take weeks to explore it all."
"Hopefully your right, I can't help but feel somethings wrong though"
"Your just paranoid, everything is o.k., I promise."
"Yeah you're right."
"Yes, I am."
"Hey liz."
"What?"
"If you were on that island in trouble, you would want people to worry right?"
"Jamie! Just shut up, everythign is okay."
"okay.... Hey liz"
"What is it jamie." Liz sighed
"You know I love you right?"
Liz smiled, "Yes, and I love you to."
They kissed just as the sun went down.
Back at the island.
This can't go on much longer men, We must surrender, they only playing with us, they know we can't win, they're just enjoying our fear, men, we must not fight anymore, we shall not give them what they want, they act like they're trying to kill us, but there wanting us to kill ourselves, so men, tonight, we do nothing, no matter wh-."
Blood splattered on the other three men.
A high pitched shriek laughter was called, and then the rest of the men knew, they were done for.
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/16/07 - 20:51 Post subject:
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To Be continued, I hope you enjoy this so far.
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/16/07 - 23:38 Post subject:
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The sun rose, Jamie got up, it was saturday thank god, he went to see if his dad was home, Sadly what he expected was true, His dad was still gone. I have to make sure he's okay, And I have to know today, Liz's dad has a boat, and Kyle and Lucas took boating school
Liz was making breakfast when Jamie ran in, and grabbed her and told her to come, She screamed "Jamie, I'[m cooking, Wait-No it's going to burn, JAMIE whats going on, Kyle and Lucas were waiting by the boat,
He explained to them what they had to do, and he told them make sure they had there pocket knives, they don't know what danger could be in the island, and they set off.
At The Island
I'm the only one left, I can't think, I'm scared, I know I won't live long, They always kill one person every time the tide comes in and thats in about 45 minutes. I have to get back alive the man though, He was curious about his son Jamie, and what he would do if he didn't return, our boat is ruined, and I have nothing to eat or drink except sand and ocean water. And BANANAS he saw them in a tree, but was it safe to go that high...
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Posted: 11/17/07 - 07:58 Post subject:
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/17/07 - 15:36 Post subject:
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On The ship it was mostly boring, the yhad nothing to do, and had no idea where the island was, twice they went in circles, the decided to go straight until they saw a land that wasn't kanthem. "Oh my god" lucas screamed. "This is hopeless, there is no f*****g way we're going to find this island."
"Shut up" kyle snapped
"Hey both of you stop, your fathers were on the island too, you aren't worried?" Jamie asked
"Nah, not really, my pa's a fighter no animal could stop him" Kyle said smiling.
"I don't really care, my dad is a drunk, and I barely see him."
"Oh.. Sory Lucas." Jamie was blushing, He went below ship to see Liz, she was sick from all of the riding. "You okay?"
"Yeah i think im going to be al- erggh." she paused, "I hope I'm going to be alright."
Jamie went ot hug his girlfriend. "I'm sorry I brought you here, You have nothing to do with this, your dad isn't even on the island."
"I would have wanted to come anyways" she said
Jamie smiled, "I'm going up, those two dimwits will kill us if im not there to watch them."
At The Island
"Ohh, yes, said the man looking at the bananas in front of him he picked one up, un peeled it and scarfed it down immediatly, and moaned at the flavor, and the soothingness in his stomach. "I really needed this" he said after swallowing 2 more bananas. The he heard The faint sound, Like a moterboat, and "Here it is" "We found it" And looked to see a boat coming.
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/17/07 - 19:15 Post subject:
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On The ship it was mostly boring, the yhad nothing to do, and had no idea where the island was, twice they went in circles, the decided to go straight until they saw a land that wasn't kanthem. "Oh my god" lucas screamed. "This is hopeless, there is no f*****g way we're going to find this island."
"Shut up" kyle snapped
"Hey both of you stop, your fathers were on the island too, you aren't worried?" Jamie asked
"Nah, not really, my pa's a fighter no animal could stop him" Kyle said smiling.
"I don't really care, my dad is a drunk, and I barely see him."
"Oh.. Sory Lucas." Jamie was blushing, He went below ship to see Liz, she was sick from all of the riding. "You okay?"
"Yeah i think im going to be al- erggh." she paused, "I hope I'm going to be alright."
Jamie went ot hug his girlfriend. "I'm sorry I brought you here, You have nothing to do with this, your dad isn't even on the island."
"I would have wanted to come anyways" she said
Jamie smiled, "I'm going up, those two dimwits will kill us if im not there to watch them."
At The Island
"Ohh, yes, said the man looking at the bananas in front of him he picked one up, un peeled it and scarfed it down immediatly, and moaned at the flavor, and the soothingness in his stomach. "I really needed this" he said after swallowing 2 more bananas. The he heard The faint sound, Like a moterboat, and "Here it is" "We found it" And looked to see a boat coming.
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/18/07 - 14:57 Post subject:
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The man was thrilled they had sent the navy to rescue them ge started shouting then he grabbed his telescope, looked through to see two guys on a boat, "Wow, they look rather young, around 17 or 16" than said to himself, he kept looking through the telescope, he saw someone coming up from the bottom of the boat, he looked familiar, but he could only see his hair, until he turned. The man gasped, he clutched his heart and could barely breathe, then he screamed "TURN bAck, don't come here it's dangerous, go back!!!"
"There is a man, it's your dad jamie, what is he saying... Go back? It's dangerous here..." lucas paused " I think we should listen to hi-" the ship started to shake, Liz ran up from below screaming then the ship flipped, dumping all of the teenagers into the water, liz started screaming and swam to jamie and clutched him tight.
"Shh liz, it's okay, what ever it is doesn't want us it was the boat" Right after jamie said the the boar burst into a about a million pieces all about the size of a pinky finger.
"Let's swim to shore," Jamie said. And they went off, into there doom.
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/18/07 - 20:14 Post subject:
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Jamie ran to hug his dad, his arms wrapped around him... But his dad didn't hug back, he just kept staring at the place hwere the boat was.
"Why did you come here.." His dad said
"Dad i wa-"
"Jamie why did you come here.."
"I wanted to see if you were okay dad..why, is there something wrong, I know the boat thing was weird but we're okay arent w-"
"Where is my dad.." Kyle said.
Jamie's father looked into his hands and started to cry, through the sob noises he was saying. "Why the f**k are you here, why did you come, you should have stayed home."
"I'm scared jamie, whats going on" Liz said getting closer to her boyfriend.
All of a sudden this high pitched noise came, and Liz screamed, jamies dad said "oh god, there here" everyone duck, dust went everywhere it was like this for at least 10 minutes
When the dust cleared everyone was looking around.
"Wheres lucas kyle said looking around worried." He started to panic, a slight cry almost. You see not many people knew this, well, only jamie and liz knew, but lucas and kyle were a couple.)
Jamies dad just shook his head and cried more.
"Dad whats going on.."
And his dad told them..
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/19/07 - 00:14 Post subject:
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I would just like to say, this story is not of a horror action filled survival of the fittest thing on an island, it is of a boys struggle to forget the past and move on.
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Posted: 11/19/07 - 00:33 Post subject:
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The rest was like a faded memory, like it had happened years ago while it had happened, the boats, at least 20 of them, heading for the island, his dad was telling them what had happened when he first noticed them, they turned around, the boat, Jamie had never seen such beautiful things in his life. they came to shore and jamie was the first to aboard, he was about to grab liz's hand to help her on when her head just blew up, that was it, blew up, nothing hit it or touched it, the blood splattered on jamies outreached hand, he just stood there watching, his dad, kyle, 2 other soldiers, there head gone. "Roll out get out of here now" he heard someone say, he was just staring, there were heading out, A boat beside them went under and came up were millions of boat pieces, and several bodies, a few other boats done the same, The boat jamie was on was lucky enough to get through, and on to the land of kanthem, His mom rushed up to him and hugged him when he stepped off the boat, she looked around for her husband to hug, but didn't see him, she waited a couple minutes, and everyone had left the boat, she started to sob... jamie just walked home, he couldn't talk, he couldn't feel anything what had happened felt like years ago, on his way there he saw Liz's parents that sadness in there eyes, the hatred torwards him for taking her there. He loved her too, did they not know that... He loved her a lot, thats when the pain came, it felt like his throat had been stopped up with cork, and his eyes had acid pouring into them, he ran home went to his room, locked the door.. and cried.
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Posted: 11/19/07 - 14:59 Post subject:
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Greggy
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Posted: 11/24/07 - 01:06 Post subject:
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Jamie didn't want to go to school, he didn't want to eat, he didn't want to do anything, it had been like this for three weeks, laying in his bed crying a lot. "If this keeps up i don't know what I can do with him" he heard his mom telling someone over the phone. Sometimes he wondered if she wanted his dad to be the one still alive, rather then him. He got this thought so caught up in his head, that it came true, he thought it was the truth, he even started making fake memories of her telling him that, he started to hate her, he started to remember things that didn't really happen, but it only lasted a few minutes, he calmed down, and the the tears just returned to his eyes, Was this worth it, living, is it worth all of this pain, the drama, the horror of life, there is no hell after life because life is the hell. There just sending more people to the island, more people to die, wasting real human beings just so for there scientific pleasure, why couldn't they go out there themselves, because they know what it is, they probably knew what was on the island to begin with, this could have all just been prevented, It's depressing, wasting human beings so you can learn. He looked at his hand, the one that liz's blood had splattered onto, he felt sick, he ran to his restroom, puked a little, he did not have much fluid in him, and he hasn't eaten in a while, so he was surprised at how much he had vomited. he went back to his bed, and just layed there.. Maybe suicide is they key he thought, it could take me out of this hell, and take me to a different one? No, you wouldn't have to live this hell just to die and go to another one, maybe life just ended, you die, and thats it, no more you forever. Jamie started looking around the room, sharp stuff, rope, paint, almost everything in here he could use to just get it over with.. but he just couldn't do it, he was just too scared. His mom came into his room with food, he wasn't going to eat it, though he took a few sips of water. She sat down beside him and started talking, jamie didn't listen he just zoned out, he was staring pictures of him and liz on there 1 year anniversery, he just kept staring, then he felt him moms lips kiss him, that was just enough, enough to make him break down, he got out of bed and ran to the ocean he started swimming, and swimming he swam for what seemed like hours, but there wasno use, he couldn't do this... right there, in the middle of the ocean, with millions of creatures that could eat him any minute now, he cried, not like any other cry, a cry, so loud it scared the fish, so loud you could hear it all the way in kanthem a cry than the people of kanthem would never forget, thisl oud noise coming from the ocean..
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Posted: 11/30/07 - 16:09 Post subject:
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Jamie didn't want to go to school, he didn't want to eat, he didn't want to do anything, it had been like this for three weeks, laying in his bed crying a lot. "If this keeps up i don't know what I can do with him" he heard his mom telling someone over the phone. Sometimes he wondered if she wanted his dad to be the one still alive, rather then him. He got this thought so caught up in his head, that it came true, he thought it was the truth, he even started making fake memories of her telling him that, he started to hate her, he started to remember things that didn't really happen, but it only lasted a few minutes, he calmed down, and the the tears just returned to his eyes, Was this worth it, living, is it worth all of this pain, the drama, the horror of life, there is no hell after life because life is the hell. There just sending more people to the island, more people to die, wasting real human beings just so for there scientific pleasure, why couldn't they go out there themselves, because they know what it is, they probably knew what was on the island to begin with, this could have all just been prevented, It's depressing, wasting human beings so you can learn. He looked at his hand, the one that liz's blood had splattered onto, he felt sick, he ran to his restroom, puked a little, he did not have much fluid in him, and he hasn't eaten in a while, so he was surprised at how much he had vomited. he went back to his bed, and just layed there.. Maybe suicide is they key he thought, it could take me out of this hell, and take me to a different one? No, you wouldn't have to live this hell just to die and go to another one, maybe life just ended, you die, and thats it, no more you forever. Jamie started looking around the room, sharp stuff, rope, paint, almost everything in here he could use to just get it over with.. but he just couldn't do it, he was just too scared. His mom came into his room with food, he wasn't going to eat it, though he took a few sips of water. She sat down beside him and started talking, jamie didn't listen he just zoned out, he was staring pictures of him and liz on there 1 year anniversery, he just kept staring, then he felt him moms lips kiss him, that was just enough, enough to make him break down, he got out of bed and ran to the ocean he started swimming, and swimming he swam for what seemed like hours, but there wasno use, he couldn't do this... right there, in the middle of the ocean, with millions of creatures that could eat him any minute now, he cried, not like any other cry, a cry, so loud it scared the fish, so loud you could hear it all the way in kanthem a cry than the people of kanthem would never forget, thisl oud noise coming from the ocean..
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Jamie started going back to school, which wasn't what he needed, everyones stares, the whispered that were supposed to be unheard, "His girlfriend and two other guys and his dad got killed right in front of him" If he heard that one more time he was going to Hurt the person who said it badly, He was in no mood, The guidance councilor would not leave him alone, he didn't want to open up to her, he didn't know her, she wasn't someone he could talk to all day, so he just ignored her. He wasn't well, almost everyday he would call home claiming to be sick, He was definitlly failing school now,he didn't care though. At home he would just sleep, he never dreamed anymore, ever, though in his sleep he always hurt the high pitched scream that was yelled right before it all happened, He though about it, it happened so fast, in movies it shows it all happen at different times but when it's real, it happens at once, then it's over..
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Posted: 06/14/08 - 17:38 Post subject:
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Very interesting!
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